How low can I get.
You know what I like this flash because it's original. It isn't really high quality but it's something I haven't seen before. If you brush up on you flash skills, maybe you can create better animated characters that are top drawn down for a overview perspective that is white. Also you are alright. PM if you need more help
While I can appreciate the effort you put into this it's the fact that it doesn't have any plot, or point that killed this, sorry.
The flash doesn't necessarily have to have a grandiose plot to work well, but it will bring your viewers in and get their attention a little more if you take some time to give us some backstory, even if it's just something as simple as "The dude is in the mood for a killing spree!" in bloody letters that drips across the screen.